Reviews for About me and you
MaddamAndRobin chapter 20 . 5/4/2015
Interesting story, it seems to be missing some passion though. Maybe I just like my stories dirtier though. I feel like I'm waiting for real action to happen. I like the characters and the relationships between them. Thanks for sharing your story. Xoxo Robin
DandyChance chapter 20 . 5/3/2015
this is awesome! although, i must say i REALLY don't like Scott. he comes off as such a knob to Alecki and so dismissive of him :(
Also Scott and Allison teen wolf? or just a coinkydink?
brookiebear5892 chapter 20 . 4/25/2015
Update please? D:
Maeve Selene chapter 20 . 3/15/2015
This story is very interesting! I wonder who Xavier is and where the man is taking Alecki... I think it's a bit sad that Azira and Alecki can't be together publicly :( You're a very good writer, keep up the good work xxx
Guest chapter 20 . 3/14/2015
Review from chapter 6 til now (because I had a little backlog).
Plotholes:
In one of the mentioned chapters your mentioned that Azira's parents AND brother were dead next chapter that same brother is alive and kicking.
Alecki has moved for awile now where are his parents and brothers reactions to the lack of a wedding announcement?
Azira hunted deer, brought it to the butcher, arranged a cook, and never served the dish.

I find stories with characters who share the same intial confusing.
AnnabelleX2 chapter 20 . 2/26/2015
Uh Oh, hope Alecki will be alright! And hopefully they wont have to hide their love for each other much longer:)
AnnabelleX2 chapter 19 . 2/14/2015
Hopefully they wont have to 'act' for long! :)
Reader chapter 18 . 2/1/2015
I like this story. I could imagine that maybe they cover up Alecki being there by saying he is with Azira's brother, maybe? I would also love to know what Annex's geography looks like. You don't have to overly describe, but just enough that I can get the picture. Also, maybe a guard or someone notices Alecki and tries to court him or something? Can't wait to see what you have next!
Guest chapter 9 . 1/28/2015
My best friends and I having an anime maraathon of whatever we could find is what would cheer me up I think. :)
Guest chapter 7 . 1/28/2015
That was a pretty good ending considering the situation. I'm also going to go out on a limb and say that 'Elliot' is the King Azira dude or whatever. cool story so far and good job on it! I like it a lot! XD
marginal-utility chapter 18 . 1/26/2015
We just want more action :) .
sugarcrazedduckie chapter 18 . 1/26/2015
I really like your story so far, but I think it would be interesting to see in addition to alecki's adjustment to his new life, to also see the development of Allison's situation.
AnnabelleX2 chapter 18 . 1/25/2015
Your welcome! Not sure why only my review, but I enjoyed the last & this chapter! Hopefully, their having to sneak around will not last long. Good luck with school!
AnnabelleX2 chapter 17 . 1/14/2015
Glad everything has been explained & hopefully it will all work out. Aiden & Zero works for me. :)
Anonymous22222222 chapter 16 . 1/13/2015
That's all that matter, giving it your best. I couldn't help hearing a dun dun dun...at the end, because Scott and Allison's relationship could become complicated. I'm excited to see Alecki showing a bit more backbone, it makes him more dynamic. I couldn't squash the feeling of Azira coming across as a coward (Alecki's mad, hurt, upset...Azira runs away). His actions were repetitive (running or hiding). It makes me wonder why all the running. You did a great setup to answer why. I love the tension you created between everyone, although not knowing why Scott is uptight with Alecki kinda throws me (it would be nice if Alecki tried to speculate why, surly it's not because he's an outsider). Overall I like the direction your going (building up the characters and the story plot). I can't wait to see what custom-made ride you'll be taking us on next.

*Brainstorm ideas: Domestic life where Alecki sees a (baby/vehicle/own clinic/honeymoon) and wants one right away, but Azira thinks its a bad idea at that time (especially if there's danger afoot in the kingdom to get Alecki, although Alecki doesn't know). It would be great to see more disagreements that show character development (honesty, maturity, etc.)
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