Reviews for Strictly Business
UzumakiMatsurika chapter 28 . 3/24/2021
Aw man. Living the story so far. I wonder what Jack would do next. Please update soon, I’ve realized it hasn’t since 2019. Please please finish.
Guest chapter 28 . 1/21/2021
Strong characters. It May be hard to finish the story and let them go, isn't it ?
Zertyul chapter 28 . 1/21/2021
Des personnages forts. Dur de mettre fin à l'histoire et de les quitter hein ?
Chimel321 chapter 28 . 12/24/2019
Thanks so much for updating/ happy 2020
CrystalHeartZyx chapter 28 . 12/22/2019
Ooo I've done that before, slipping from first person to third and varying the omniscience. Tis a true problem, especially when you're writing multiple stories with different narrator perspectives. One of my stories I literally write at the top of each section "First Person: 'name'" or "Third Person: 'name'" and another story I just straight up switch the POV and stubbornly won't actually label if we've switched so you just have to read to find out.
Anyway, glad to see you haven't given up. Sad to see Jack hasn't given up his stubbornness yet. Ah but that's why we love him. Sort of. At least you've got an end goal for your story, unlike me who's just like "Now I gotta write how shit goes down...why am I writing why shit goes down again?"
Chimel321 chapter 27 . 2/11/2019
Great work !
laura chapter 26 . 7/22/2018
Legit forgot about this story. Still love it!
Lilly-is-trash chapter 26 . 7/22/2018
Missed You! i hope this is still fun to write, it's so upsetting seeing people get demotivated on their stories. i enjoyed this chapter, Cole is totally here for being a sugar daddy, it's pretty funny.
WhyWeWashTheWindows chapter 25 . 1/20/2018
I started this story a long while ago and stopped before the end of the first chapter. Somehow I found it again and gave it another go and I’m really glad I did. I’ve been mildly obsessed with your characters for three days now. I absolutely love Jack and Cole. No joke. I thought this hadn’t been updated in years so I was thrilled to see 2017 and now I can’t wait for the next update.
Laura chapter 25 . 1/7/2018
Is this being continued? :(
ruby chapter 25 . 10/11/2017
plllllease update soon! I love this story!
MacLekich chapter 25 . 9/5/2017
I am late! Yeah I don't know how many other future project ideas you have in mind, but I do think you have something special going with these characters - so I would be right behind a second draft if you decided to do it after you finish. Just to get SB and SC playing in and out of eachother more, and maybe to change up the speed of Jack and Cole a bit. Obviously it depends where your end game is about to be, so I don't want to make too many comments at this point! Got to say, its nice seeing Jack and Cole having a good time, while still snarking at eachother. I feel like they're too comfortable as if this is the end of the story or its all about to go south, but judging by your comments its the latter, so I look forward to that!
spoonring chapter 25 . 8/29/2017
Huh why was Cole "weird"? Looking forward to the next chapter!
rgrimes8989 chapter 25 . 8/25/2017
So does Martin have a crush on Jack? Or is he just super nosy and personal? There's definitely something afoot with the way he's acting. Would never have been able to tell that most of this chapter was pre-written! It flowed well n I felt like the story was really advancing!
Karunjaal chapter 25 . 8/24/2017
Thank you for these updates they were a blessing :3 you write some pretty good smut, good focus on imagery and stuff.
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