Mind-blowing beauty right there!
What a wonderful story. I'm so glad things turned out the way they did.

choking:grey
or suffocation

I honestly cannot understand much of the
explanation but do not fear, I kinda got it :D
So basically he is saying that they can choose either
to let all the dying happen on it's own or they
can fight it and try to win the fight with the dead itself?
Or am I off the track again? XD
Anyways, I think the story was good, it was a real surprise to me
that Daniel wasn't the murdered ( Seriously, I doubt everyone close
to others, I need help O.O XD )
Anyways, you seemed to succeed pretty good with the story :D ( Not being offensive :O )
16 favs and 27 followers... That is like a miracle in this site! O.O It is even a surprise to have one review :D Good lucj with the other stories you may make :)
( And sorry for being late :P )

So I was completely off XD
He wasn't a shy guy running from his feelings XD
But he was just kinda lost? I should understand these emotions
more in the future XD
Anyways, good chapter :D ( Never knew about kiss rape before though O.o )

So, for me it seems like Daniel is actually a shy guy
trying to escape his feelings? o.o Or am I completely lost? XD
Well, I suppose I see in the next chapter? :P

So she died but came back alive? O.O
I never thought that as a possibility :D
But that was very clever though, great job! :D
I bet you managed to surprise a lot of people with that :D
I really like the way it goes, now I cannot guess
how this ends though XD

Sorry Daniel, I blamed you for a murderer :P
Well, at least the murder wasn't caused by
Daniel even though I was so certain it was him XD
I some reason always blame the ones closest to the charter O.o
But since this is not the end... I wonder what happens now O.o
Great chapter! ( Well kind of, I mean the main charter got just murdered and all XD )

Well, it is odd to talk with people from another country,
it is just odd in a way XD
I am not into romance all that much but had this supernatural side so
I had to check this out :D
Anyways, I am going to finish this tonight so sorry for the sudden
review spam XD

So now that I finally finished Legend, I can now finish this too :D
I wanted to finish it sooner since I honestly like it more, no offense
in anyway :P
But back to the subject :D
They both have quite good points in their views, neither of their
death marks can promise good future :P
So in this, I am not sure who has the better point XD
But since it is a murder... I suspect Daniel! O.O

The idea behind the story was fascinating and really good! My only complaint was the pacing. It went entirely too fast to be believable and the main guy's decision to just not talk to her after she survived seemed completely out of character and the final chapter was confusing. Her indecision about confronting him for his abandonment was weird and then all of a sudden they're married and society's views if the marks has taken a complete 180? It was way out of left field. The ending question/quote is very powerful but it could be 100 times better if the story was developed. This felt like an outline with placemark chapters (if that makes sense).

This was an amazing idea - I really think you should develop it into something longer and more in-depth, and try and get it published.

Still remains my favourite story! :D Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

This is a really great story! :) it's a very cool idea and it's awesomely written :) update soon plz! :)

That's amazing! I wondered what you'd do with this. But it really makes sense that they wouldn't bother trying to fix her if they knew she'd just die anyway. It's so cool that nothing's certain anymore. I can't help but feel that she screwed with fate, so now fate will get her back... and there are still two chapters...
Just so you know, I usually only review if I see something I really like or am surprised by etc, and I'm really picky/lazy. ;)
Keep up the amazing work! :D
Tarah xXx

Oh my gosh YAS! Thank you for not making this chapter or the last chapter the last one thank you thank you thank you THANK YOU! :D :D :D :D :D