okay...so its not the end?!
well i'll luk forward 2 them...
please update soon! :D

Loved this! Such a fascinating idea, and I liken how well you developed this, exploring the possibilities of suicide and hospital attention. Besides, your characters are so likable, even Cathy who didn't leave a very good first impression.

I wish I had gotten on this story earlier, but I'm so glad that I found it in the archive even this late in its run! I can't wait to read the rest :)

I really like the idea of everyone knowing when they'll die, it's a refreshing change from other stories that are all alike! I hope that when you are finished with your other story, you'll come back to this and really expand what you have because I think it could be fantastic.

The cover picture is very nice :)
And the chapter was enjoyable too. No typos that I noticed. Although yes, that cause of death was fairly random. Still, it's good to know the story doesn't end here.

whatever...!

I think you could do without telling us that its not the end. Thats the whole point of a story, yeah?

Whoa. Interesting concept. I can't wait to read more!

I hope Daniel's not the culprit . I'm suspicious by nature lol

oh i cant even wait...
so what the heck? she just gonna go along knowing she's gonna be murdered?!
Daniel's pretty decent i'll say...
please update soon! :D

I'm just glad to see a new chapter to a fascinating story. :)

I thought that this story wasn't going to be continued. I'm so glad that it is! :D

Oh this had me so emotional, it's so sad. poor Jen :-(;-(

Asphyxiation? I don't think it would count as injury, although in some cases it would be murder. But if drowning (and, to a smaller degree, electrocution and fire -take these straight outta the Sims, didja? ;)-)is counted, I'd think this would, as well. Like, say, suffocating in outer space, or carbon monoxide poisoning, or accidentally hanging yourself. Not, y'know, with a noose, but...well, you can imagine. Also, does execution count as murder? And fire and electricity don't seem like they'd be different enough to necessitate different colors (but then, that's a judgment call, isn't it?) Also...if a male is killed by his partner during childbirth, would not he have been killed by childbirth? And wouldn't suicide be a mark, or would it count as injury, or maybe murder? Are there different shades of colors for mixed deaths? Or for different sub-categories? Like, say, drowning in the ocean as opposed to drowning in a pool, or being pushed off a cliff as opposed to being shot. Doesn't anyone question that they have marks? And with murder, wouldn't it have to be multi-colored, almost? If someone got drowned, or given the plague, or poisoned or stabbed, any of them could count as the others. I like your book. Good job.

Oops ... so I forgot about this notification in my inbox ... this explains so much! I mean I sort of understood things before, but I'm a little slow to understand stuff like this ... Now I'm really curious to see how this will end. I hope you update soon.
Keep up the amazing work! :D
Tarah xXx

I am quite interested to know what her death will be.