Reviews for Nebulae
leavesfallingup chapter 1 . 1/20/2015
A fascinating story. I couldn't understand why people should react so negatively. Now it makes sense (I'm reviewing from chapter 1, but I read the whole story so far and had to log in to submit a review.
Bastard From North chapter 6 . 1/17/2015
So it wasn't normal death after all :P
But those lines kinda gives the impression
of someone killing her with a blade since they
were covering he whole back :P
Great chapter! :)
I kinda understand that she doesn't
want to be pitied by anyone :P
nlori1234 chapter 6 . 1/16/2015
I love your story!I really do. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Tumnus chapter 6 . 1/15/2015
You made me late for my lecture. Because I couldn't stop reading. Don't know how representative that is of the quality, or whether I just really didn't want to go to my lecture, but it's a good chapter all the same. Afraid I don't have any spelling/grammar checks because I'm busy, but have you considered/already written about what happens if someone tries to commit suicide early? Or tries to kill themselves on their death day because the wait is too painful? Can death marks change, or are they just in a comma until then? Also, you might already be putting this in, but old age seems to be considered as a blessing, even though it would mean all their friends and family would die around them, and they would know about their impending loneliness for their whole lives. Sounds more like a curse to me... But I'm not writing it I suppose. As a personal interest, what about animals? Are vets more valued than doctors in this world? (that would be awesome)
Bastard From North chapter 5 . 1/14/2015
Just a "Yo"
Wait, two months? O.o It sure was surprise since I thought
she would die some weird death that never would have been
happened before :D
Like no one would know how or when she would die :P
But now we all wait to see the next chapter! :D
Keep it up! :)
And also, I did read it sooner :D
Bastard From North chapter 4 . 1/14/2015
Daniel is awesome :D
Still creepy mind doctor though :D
And as I promised, I did read sooner, I think :P
I was pretty sure at the start that he was some kind
of popular guy who cares of no one :D No idea why though O.o
Keep the story going! :)
Bastard From North chapter 3 . 1/12/2015
Now this is interesting :P It seems like he is more than
stubborn :D Though in a way it is creepy since he is some
kind of mind doctor :P ( No offense to anyone )
Supernatural... Was there some kind of hint?
Like the show called Supernatural? :D
Come on, you can't keep her mark hidden so long, I wanna know
it already XD
Like every one else I think :D
Great chapter, i even seems like she got a friend :)
Bastard From North chapter 2 . 1/12/2015
I like the style you write :D
It is just amazing :D Sorry for again being late for this story,
I've been trying catch up with all the updates :P
Anyways, I really like the story so far but knowing how
you would die, I would rater not know :D
Keep it coming :)
I'll read more soon! ( This time for real :D )
bookworm44 chapter 5 . 1/6/2015
please please please update this soon!
Tumnus chapter 5 . 1/6/2015
Couple of typos. My favourite is that his friends 'corned' him. All I can think is them throwing popcorn at him, and I can't stop laughing. Also, 2094-2007 is 87, which is over 80 years - nearly 90 years later. But other than that, good job. Not that there's much to review really.
Bastard From North chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
Well this is defiantly different from you're other stories :D
Knowing the day you die, kinda interesting :P One things just
made me curious, does all the people have some kind of marking?
Or was I blind? :D
But then again I am late since there are more chapters so I guess I'll figure
it out :P
I really like the start of this, it is kinda mysterious. And I bet a lot of
people can relate to rather being alone than in the crew so getting into
the story isn't that hard :D I really like the way it seems to be going
so I'll read more chapters in the morning! :)
Romance? I didn't notice that part until later on :D This will be interesting :)
Tumnus chapter 4 . 11/4/2014
I liked the 'hello daughter and stranger' bit. Very amusing. Actually, all of the characters seem to have a similar type of humour to them: maybe that's because you only write people that would get along with each other, but consider giving your characters a voice that isn't yours a little bit more. Still liked it though _
TheRoseShadow21 chapter 4 . 11/3/2014
This seems good so far.I will look forward to seeing the next chapters
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 4 . 11/3/2014
"Jenny's father rolled his eyes. "I'll go put my shoes back on.""
I don't know why, but this line made me laugh my head off. I think I'm tired or something.
This is brilliant! Please update soon!
Keep up the amazing work! :D
Tarah xXx
Elizabeth Newsom chapter 3 . 10/2/2014
Wow, this is a really interesting story. It's so fascinating! With the marks that symbolize their death and all. Frankly, I think it's pure genius :) Please continue!
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