I wanted to like it, but there were gaping plot holes. The main one is, how did she not learn his name when they got married at least? They would have signed a marriage register where full names are used. That isn't even mentioned in the story. The heroine is just so stupid. If she was working in the business world, there is no way she didn't know the name of the CEO of the company. Researching the boss is like step one of applying for a job in the corporate world. And after she was betrayed, why didn't it occur to her once to claim half of the fortune out of spite? How come no one knows they were married? The people in the office knew and wouldn't someone been suspicious why the husband and wife didn't live together two weeks after marrying?! Anyway, this story would have been good if it didn't require the reader to suspend disbelief this much. Cute epilogue though.

Aaaaaaaw! This was so cute! Really good job with this story!

It was such a beautiful story... I actually cried.
Thank you for writing it... :)

Thanks for this wonderful story. Loved the ending.

Nice to see that the story has a happy ending. It was great that Sebastian was able to protect her and her family and send his stepfather to jail for a long time. Also nice to see that he bought out the other company and gave her power of attorney to run it. Nice to see that she us going to give Sebastian a big family. The only cliffhanger us the nightmare that Nolan had about his parents being in danger. Could it be that Sebastian's father is going to show up at a later time.

If not then you can continue your story from Florida at a later time when you are ready.

Let see if he is going to be honest to her and protect her family. Now her father is in the hospital what is Sebastian going to do to help her and go after he father.

Willl be waiting the further releases of this story. Still a little leary of him and his family.

The plot, the twist and I hope it doesn't end. Love the story, keep it up _

This story seems too good to be true. How could neveah forgive her mother for hurting her father and go to her wedding?

I sorry but I do not trust him yet. I still believe that he and his family and now her mother are going to do something to her to completely destroy her. I think that he is planning to take the baby when it is horned and tell her he is filing for custody and his lawyers will make it so that she can not see the child. This is just my opioin. I hope he does not do it.
I am hoping that they get back together for the child's sake. If not then I believe that she should take both companies to the cleaners and end up owning everything.

We wil just have to see how the story plays out. Only you know how it is going to end. Keep up the great work and I will be waiting for the next chapter to read.

Great. Who could it be. I really hate to think that Sebastian is using her mother now to get to her. I still do not trust any of his family. She still needs to take both families to the cleaners.

Hope that she is not being set up by her mother for a emotional hurting and to be let down and destroyed by the evil family members. Father, son and mother-in-law, and Oliver treated her like dirt and now could her own mother and possibly father be setting her up for a major downfall.

Hope not, but only you know the outcome of the scene and how it will play out for the rest of the story. Will be waiting for the next great chapter. Keep up the great writing.

Hmmm, the possibilities here of who it is. I can only think of two people - Sebastian & Oliver. I would assume Sebastian - he's probably been in talks with her mother (he has his ways) and possibly even her dad. Looking forward to finding out for sure.

Thank you for te update! Oh man that was definitely a crazy way to find out she's pregnant lol. Looking forward to the next update!

I wonder what he is going to say to Neveah in light of what happened when she told him about the baby? Interesting chapter.

Oh great. Now mommy says that it us her fault the way that everyone treated her. Mommy, daddy and Sebastian treated her wrong. Now Sebastian just happened to show up at the hospital. I do not think so, I believe that he is stalking her. He is not finished trying to destroy her life. He is just as sick and twisted as his family. When he finds out that she is expecting he will control her life until the baby is borned and then I think that he will do something to get complete custody of the child and that will put her over the edge. I still think that she should divorce him and take both families to the cleaners.

I wonder if her mother let Sebastian know about the doctor appointment. Come on he just appeared there. I do not think so.

Can not wait to see what transpires here between them. Will be awaiting the next chapter with baited breath.

Keep up the great work.

Uh Oh! I hate that Sebastian's "mother" went through the crap she did and she has every right to pursue bringing Gregory down and really hurting Neveah was never their intention, but rather she was the by-product of their machinations. Now he knows...was he following her, did her mother have something to do with it or was he by chance just in the neighborhood?