That was a great ending.

I can't wait to see what else happens in the story. This will be a good story to finish because it is very interesting.

The beginning of the story was good, not the greatest plot development but it started out good. You lost me when you said "your name is zero, okay?". I thought that I jumped a few chapters in a story and was missing something

Nice plot twist at the end, I want to see what happened to Zero.

Not sure how 'realistic' this is once the boy is trained to become a killer. I like your beginning with a kidnapped child idea. I think the concept of a kidnapping is interesting. The kidnapping itself could use more detail though.

Have you done any research to find out if this happens in real life?

Hm, intriguing. Does Zero perchance end up having to fight against the one who trained him?