Reviews for Zero
JoshFisher chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
That was a great ending.
JoshuaMabus chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
I can't wait to see what else happens in the story. This will be a good story to finish because it is very interesting.
jrwils628 chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
The beginning of the story was good, not the greatest plot development but it started out good. You lost me when you said "your name is zero, okay?". I thought that I jumped a few chapters in a story and was missing something
Nathan219 chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
Nice plot twist at the end, I want to see what happened to Zero.
msfoxycomets chapter 1 . 10/2/2014
Not sure how 'realistic' this is once the boy is trained to become a killer. I like your beginning with a kidnapped child idea. I think the concept of a kidnapping is interesting. The kidnapping itself could use more detail though.

Have you done any research to find out if this happens in real life?
BarrenChasm chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
Hm, intriguing. Does Zero perchance end up having to fight against the one who trained him?