This was interesting. I feel that there is multiple interpretations of this but I tend to think outside of the box. It was sweet though maybe bittersweet because there is tinge of sadness towards the end.
To be honest I don't know how to review poetry.

I really did enjoy it though.

Have a Fantastic Day!:)

It's really descriptive, and fun to read, loved it! Thanks for letting me know through my forum: Writer's Pen the Sword.

It remids me of child hood fantasies, so it was truelly a trip down memory lane too.

Hey wil log in from computer to give a proper review. This was really well written! Loved it. Will get my friend and brother to R-and-R to!

Keep writing!