Reviews for The Scar Upon The Land
nelso555 chapter 1 . 10/3/2014
Good story. It was very descriptive and pretty well written, and I liked the concept of searching for the temple of alchemists. Although - and I get that it was a 'short descriptive piece' - but I would have liked to have seen more development in terms of the actual story - for instance; why was this person looking for the temple of alchemists?

But like I said, it was still very well written, so good job.

- MN