Reviews for A Drawing
Jeimii-chan2009 chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
Cool, I love your wording here. This is well written and you really draw the picture with your words here.
John-the-H-is-silent chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
Beautiful. I love the imagery and metaphors and ideas you express. As constructive criticism I'd say, for a poem, maybe each line should be shorter. Keep the ideas and imagery but play with the words and make it simpler; more delicate.