Reviews for Mysterious Marriage |
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Moira chapter 11 . 11/16/2014 I love this story much; it's amazingly written and so emotional (: how marvelous. Please update soon, I'm looking forward to what you have in store this time (: |
Guest chapter 11 . 11/16/2014 Can they adopt lily? Great story pls update soon thanks! |
pastelloli chapter 11 . 11/16/2014 great chapter.. david being asshole and make me wanna throw the coffe in his face.. owh, I'm curious about the story behind Tate's scar in the jaw.. can't wait for the next chapter.. |
skye real chapter 11 . 11/16/2014 I love the flaws on both characters and yet they compliment each other. Tate is an amazing guy but scenes with David is a big 'ggrrrr' for me I don't like that guy. He may have been a good friend to Lee for a time but he's been a real pain to her. Love the development. Cant wait for more. |
XXHotSparklesXX chapter 11 . 11/15/2014 As if David could even compare to Tate lol! That whole part annoyed me to no end! Bastard haha. Tate is,once again, so damn lucky he has Amilee! Now they gotta get through the debt issues and the past issues and the whole get married for real and confess your feelings you fools! lol loved it, a bit short but hey! anythings good for me. Wanna see more of the sweet lil kids and a possibility of Lee shooting for her dreams. Oh and maybe some more fluff and stuff haha feel like im always repeating myself in these reviews but i just cant get enough! Story is addicting cant wait for more Love as always 3 |
July Tarrant chapter 10 . 11/14/2014 Over too soon! This was one of my favorite chapters yet! I love Lilly, and I loved seeing tate finally fall all the way in love with Amilee. This is beautiful. 3 I am glad you are doing better! I still have you in my prayers, as well as your friend's family and your friend. 3 love you! |
Guest chapter 10 . 11/13/2014 Great chapter. |
Leasah chapter 10 . 11/13/2014 I'm here just to make you write faster. Haha, just kidding. I loved that they both realized and acknowledged their own feelings. I felt sad for Tate when Lee stopped him, but I can totally understand her. Love Ryan for being there to talk some sense into Tate. I hope he does something with what he has realized. I also hope that they are able to get rid of the bad mafia guys! Love you for updating! Can't wait to see what happens next. :) |
mylittleprincess chapter 10 . 11/13/2014 I want them to live happily ever after :) |
luckybrains chapter 10 . 11/12/2014 Another great chapter! I love your descriptions of the emotions and everything that goes on between these two love birds. :) Can't wait for the next one. |
Guest chapter 10 . 11/12/2014 Awesome chapter, cant wait for the update |
XXHotSparklesXX chapter 10 . 11/12/2014 Yay! They are getting closer! Now they just need some closure and settle the issues of their darn feelings. Cant wait for the next chapter, and cant wait to see more of their passion and more lily and luke! So adorable, really. Hope Tate expresses his wanting Lee more! 3 Lots of love :) Cant wait! |
Jester79 chapter 10 . 11/12/2014 They both have trust issues so if they would take a step back and try and look at it from each other's POV they might be able to make a better decision about how they are not like the ones that came before. |
RraderWriter2000 chapter 10 . 11/12/2014 "Emotions are fun." Ha, tell that to the heartstrings this chapter just pulled. I still love the story and the chapter regardless. How could I not? |
KirbyEos chapter 9 . 11/10/2014 Amazing story and nice chapter |