Reviews for Mysterious Marriage
Chimel321 chapter 19 . 1/15/2017
Oh gosh , pls don't leave me hanging, continue the story. It was amazing. Great job.
hannahward chapter 19 . 1/12/2017
Wow! I've just read the entire story to here and I love it! It was so well some and gradual and realistic the way you wrote them falling in love. I really enjoyed it :)
Katja de Vries chapter 19 . 1/11/2017
Awesome chapter as always. I can't wait to read some more!
Elle Winters 9 chapter 19 . 1/11/2017
Love how you update so quickly. Great story! Ryan is amazing! Hope there a sequel with him when this is all done!
luckybrains chapter 18 . 1/11/2017
Another wonderful chapter. Thanks for the recap of why the men were after her in the first place. Saved me having to look back and see what I'd forgotten :).
Happy New Year! I hope this year brings you many wonderful experiences, growth and happiness.
luckybrains chapter 17 . 1/11/2017
I am so sorry to hear about your daughter. Will keep you in my prayers 3
Great chapter! Just as they were about to get married, disaster strikes! I'm so glad you've started writing again.
Pennie Wagner chapter 12 . 1/3/2017
This was a super long chapter and I loved every sentence. Really, you do so good with this story. Thank you again. Also, I seriously love Ryan. I think he is my favorite 'best friend' character I have yet to ever some across in the many, many, many tales I have read. I pray that you will do him justice and either give him a happy ending in this story or in his own story at some point.
Thank you once again.
Your newly faithful reader,
~ Pennie Wagner
Pennie Wagner chapter 11 . 1/3/2017
Seriously, I just want to shake these two...!
UGGGGGGGGGH. Just tell each other how you feel, you fools! lol
Pennie Wagner chapter 9 . 1/3/2017
Sorry to hear about your loss. So, here are my current theories. Probably not right though.
First, I am...80% sure Lee and Tate are going to end up adopting Lily at some point. She is a beautiful little girl.
Second, I am...30% sure that Lee may actually be pregnant...but this is a BIG maybe.
This chapter was really nice and I thank you for it. Still loving this.
Pennie Wagner chapter 8 . 1/3/2017
I was freaking out so bad this chapter, you have no idea! Oh, man, was tearing up a little too.
Pennie Wagner chapter 6 . 1/3/2017
Yes. I was in the break room of my work when I was reading this. lol squealing like a little girl and giggling so bad...lol
Pennie Wagner chapter 5 . 1/3/2017
I am the same. I don't understand any sports, honestly. Personally, I thought this chapter turned out pretty well. What was it that you found dissatisfying about it? You established quite a lot. Lee has broken her main way of having a relationship with David, as well as stopping the constant stream of heartache, pain, and anger she would have to be going through if she stayed. Tate fixed his business problems and, unintentionally, dealt a heavy blow to a man who is very obviously a long-standing rival of his.
Besides all that, now that Lee is out of that situation, she can start to heal a lot better. Its good for her, good for Tate, and good for Ryan, since he'll get some extra help. :D
Pennie Wagner chapter 4 . 1/3/2017
Go get him, Tate!
Really loving this. I noticed you had some small spelling or grammatical errors here and there. I don't know if that bothers you at all or if you are worried about it. It definitely didn't stop my emjoyment of the story though.
I'm going to guess that Tate is going to inform David that he is stealing away his secretary.
Pennie Wagner chapter 3 . 1/3/2017
Yes, they are very cute. I'd wager adorable even. Thank you once again for this chapter. On to the next.
Pennie Wagner chapter 1 . 1/3/2017
This was so funny! I was laughing most of the last part of it. I loved it. Please continue. I know I have quite a few chapters to catch up with. I don't know if you have finished this, but if you haven't, please, please do so!
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