Reviews for Family
LDF chapter 1 . 10/15/2014
["Ma," he called. Perdita Schneider raised her eyes from a crocheting project from where she sat in her rocking chair in the den.]

Remember to start a new paragraph when you introduce a new speaker or action.

["Ooh, give that to me," she leaned toward him in her chair and snatched it out of his hand.]

If there isn’t a speech verb, then it’s the end of a sentence, so there should be a period instead of a comma in the quotes.

So why does Perdita only want boys? Is it because only men can manage the crops?