These are all wonderful. Every chapter managed to create a completely different, yet vivid, mood and image. I especially loved the one about the airplanes in the third chapter. Great work!

This is really good! Can I make a suggestion? Maybe put all the chapters together as one so that reader doesnt experience a strong break when going to the next line. It would create a more intense and fluid feeling of emotion. But great job!

Oooh deep

Very expressive. I enjoy these little thoughts- beautiful.

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