Reviews for To love another
Keve Marsh chapter 21 . 6/4/2015
Wow, a great conclusion, I liked how Noren and Arfella's relationship has developped into a romantic couple...keep up the good work
Lady SeeGard chapter 2 . 5/19/2015
This seems like an interesting idea, both for characters and scenario . oh and I love drabbles!
Keve Marsh chapter 20 . 5/19/2015
Wow, you sure knew how to introduce Theresa she's quite the villian...anyway glad you're back to your old writing style
Keve Marsh chapter 19 . 5/10/2015
Hmm, well you've did better, but I understand, still like it :3
Keve Marsh chapter 18 . 4/2/2015
Wow, Arfella's backstory although was kinda expected it turned up pretty sad, and hey at least they got some romance in the end...:3
Keve Marsh chapter 17 . 3/16/2015
I almost cried on the part where Noren omforted Arfella, and c'mon Noren you are obviously in love with her (both emotionally and physially)
And I gotta admit I like when you tell legends in your story.
Keve Marsh chapter 16 . 3/5/2015
*Clap**Clap**Clap*...I applaud, this is a very impressive chapter, I liked how you made Fane such an SS, Xanthaus had a piercingly interesting fatherly figure, Arfy going all lovey Dovey on Noren, and I liked the DragonBorne theme...once again this is an impressive chapter
Keve Marsh chapter 15 . 2/21/2015
Well, you've sure made up for that filler chapter, I see you've presented many characters at once, good job, I hope you start the plot twist soon...:)
Keve Marsh chapter 14 . 2/17/2015
Noren should stop stuffing his stomache with the Rankalian food I see...XD
JK, it was a nice chapter, although it progressed nothing in the story
Keve Marsh chapter 13 . 2/8/2015
I liked the corridor crossing scene, and the concept of Rankal is rather "unusual" I think a plot twist is about to take place soon :3
Keve Marsh chapter 12 . 1/29/2015
Nothing beats a fantasy story with an ageless mage (I think I'll like Mag) hey and is it just me or dod your chapters got longer...:3
Keve Marsh chapter 11 . 1/28/2015
"Note to self, no one wins in a headbutt" ...pretty badass of Arfy
and I'm guessing that Noren is poisoned now...that's a twist.
Keve Marsh chapter 10 . 1/14/2015
Oh how sweet... sleeping together on a tree...this chapter is too romantic :3
Keve Marsh chapter 9 . 1/3/2015
I loved this chapter the most! I like escaping and survival scenes, I admire Willow's care for Noren...keep going looking forward for the adventure :3
Keve Marsh chapter 8 . 12/27/2014
Wow, I can see the relationship between Noren and Arfella shaping up, nice chapter, I liked how Willow played the role of the voice of reason around here...;) happy holidays
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