Reviews for To love another |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, a great conclusion, I liked how Noren and Arfella's relationship has developped into a romantic couple...keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() This seems like an interesting idea, both for characters and scenario . oh and I love drabbles! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, you sure knew how to introduce Theresa she's quite the villian...anyway glad you're back to your old writing style |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, well you've did better, but I understand, still like it :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, Arfella's backstory although was kinda expected it turned up pretty sad, and hey at least they got some romance in the end...:3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I almost cried on the part where Noren omforted Arfella, and c'mon Noren you are obviously in love with her (both emotionally and physially) And I gotta admit I like when you tell legends in your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Clap**Clap**Clap*...I applaud, this is a very impressive chapter, I liked how you made Fane such an SS, Xanthaus had a piercingly interesting fatherly figure, Arfy going all lovey Dovey on Noren, and I liked the DragonBorne theme...once again this is an impressive chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, you've sure made up for that filler chapter, I see you've presented many characters at once, good job, I hope you start the plot twist soon...:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Noren should stop stuffing his stomache with the Rankalian food I see...XD JK, it was a nice chapter, although it progressed nothing in the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the corridor crossing scene, and the concept of Rankal is rather "unusual" I think a plot twist is about to take place soon :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nothing beats a fantasy story with an ageless mage (I think I'll like Mag) hey and is it just me or dod your chapters got longer...:3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Note to self, no one wins in a headbutt" ...pretty badass of Arfy and I'm guessing that Noren is poisoned now...that's a twist. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh how sweet... sleeping together on a tree...this chapter is too romantic :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this chapter the most! I like escaping and survival scenes, I admire Willow's care for Noren...keep going looking forward for the adventure :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I can see the relationship between Noren and Arfella shaping up, nice chapter, I liked how Willow played the role of the voice of reason around here...;) happy holidays |