Reviews for The First Moat
midknightrose chapter 1 . 11/2/2014
This was a rather amusing story. I enjoyed it.
Jmin.A chapter 1 . 10/14/2014
I quite enjoyed this story! Especially, the ending! Oh gosh, they're stuck in the castle xD Haha! Quite hilarious! I too, am a new writer (: Could you please do me a favor, and give me feedback on the story I wrote? Its called Innovating Feelings. Have an amazing day! (: