Wow I was almost shaking myself when she had that interaction with him. You had me hooked word for word ;-)

So, he let them work for him. )

This was an awesome chapter. Got some really good characterization for Braxton! Can't wait for more!

I am anticipating the next chapter. Uuuuugh.

Idi

I can tell this story is going to be amazing! You are such a talented writer! I love your work immensely. You are the reason I fell in love with historical fictions!

I hope you are able to get over your writer's block.

Idi

I could really imagine a cute little five year old, when you described George trying to wave. You have a very good ability of describing things, landscapes, people, sensations...I love reading it.

I love the children already. You describe their conditions really well too. Can't wait to see what Braxton decides ;-)

I like this story very much so far!

This is going to be such a great story! I am so excited! The intrigue and mystery is keeping me at the edge of my seat. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter :)

The concept of tar and feathering is a very interesting one, and I have not seen anyone explore it on fictionpress so far! (That I have read at least) This looks to be a promising story with tons of emotional breakthrough and hardship. Can't wait!

I love this so far! Always enjoy your writing!

Interesting beginning, can't wait for the rest of the story.

You already had me after when she first left the house. I kind of feel excited about this. I can't wait to see how this will unfold.

Interesting beginning. I'm intrigued to find out more ;-)

So not expected this story and I love it haha. I am curious to see where it goes! I love the history you provide in your stories it brings a depth that many other writers miss out on. Seriously can't wait for more!

this story seems interesting and i liked your writing style,it's very hope you'll update soon,can't wait :)