|Reviews for The Appointment|
| Shampoo Suicide chapter 2 . 11/5/2014
The dissolution of a friendship is an interesting topic, and one many readers will relate to. I like the premise of discussing what happened/is going wrong with a therapist throughout the work too, if that is the way you're going to progress with it. Your writing is pretty clear and simple, making it easy and enjoyable to read. I think this may have promise! Keep at it.
| Kalleh chapter 2 . 10/22/2014
Awesome story so far! I used to have a friend named Abby, and I had to cut that relationship as well.
One thing though, you wrote that Abby was "committed" to the hospital. I think you mean "admitted." :)
| Savannah Rousse chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
This is really good!
It's very vague but it catches your attention, and I am already dying to know what happened with Abby.