|Reviews for Drawing Scars|
| PoetOfSaiMiHunManKal chapter 1 . 12/5/2018
This reminds me a lot of the time I was suicidally depressed myself. Though I never really cut myself (was too much of a coward and only succeeded in pricking my wist with a needle once) and instead thought about jumping in front of trains
Anyways, the poem conveys your pain quite well and I can really relate. The idea of the knife being a pencil was both creative and effective.
| scudcrow chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
Well said...once it starts, it's hard to stop the flow of all that you hold pristine and white (not just the parchment). I like the directness of the writing though it could be viewed as steel cold. One would have to walk away only to be incessantly reminded what was left behind.
Feel free to R&R any of my works.
| Woedin chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
Oh My! What a despairing vision, and so deeply evocative of heartbroken depression, and hopelessness. I admire your skill in painting, such emotion. Though some writers would fear to go there, I think it will speak to so many! A fine example of your quality writing skill.