|Reviews for Dell|
| Chosen one 1010 chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
The answer is always going to be Yes. That's because it's true love. The only way the true love is going to work if you're are honest To your self and to your loved ones.
| msfoxycomets chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
There seems to be some formatting issues with however you uploaded this. Try fixing it, will you?
Just to clarify...Tim is Dr. Marco, right? For the first half of this, I thought there might be a third character. You probably need to establish that Dr. Marco is Tim by saying his full name at one point.
Otherwise, I like how you jump back and forth between places and "times."
Good set up of a dystopian world!
| BarrenChasm chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
I'm terribly sorry but I cannot read this. I don't know what caused this to happen but I just can't. I apologize.
| JoshuaMabus chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
This was a very good story I like how the characters are faced with this problem. Then I also liked how in the end tommy was pinned to the ground.
| JoshFisher chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
This story I'd dystopian, not fantasy