|Reviews for A Homerun For A Bullied Girl|
| CharmedMoon84 chapter 1 . 4/6/2015
This is good but there are a couple of misspelled words that need to be corrected. How can police suddenly tackle Martin Kent if they're not present to begin with?
| poopllama chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
I don't believe you know what fascism actually is, and the plot seems totally unrealistic as do the characters. The plot didn't seem to develop very well, but the characters' personalities are very well defined, though they are too black-and-white. They're portrayed as totally sadistic or absolutely rebellious. There's no color in them, and they're all quite cliche.