Reviews for Deadly Love
rReaver chapter 24 . 2/24/2016
Amazing story! It Will be my favourite for a long time :)
Guest chapter 24 . 8/30/2015
this was one of the best fics I have read awesome plot :)
Jester79 chapter 22 . 7/15/2015
Yikes - It was an awful big family to try and escape from - I can't help but think that unless Raimondo is dead - no one will get away.
Jester79 chapter 21 . 7/9/2015
He just didn't realize how bossy she was or how strong her feelings for him are. I'm sure escaping won't be easy.
Yui Nightcore chapter 21 . 7/8/2015
Man, my chest hurts! That was awesome! Keep going! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Yui xxx
Jester79 chapter 19 . 6/26/2015
Well I think it's safe to say that he cares so much that he had her brother released and is now taking her away to keep her safe at the risk of being killed himself.
TheClosetWriter16 chapter 18 . 6/22/2015
I haven't read this in a while, but I'm really enjoying it :)
sparkfirereader chapter 16 . 6/2/2015
Really wish she'd turn into a Gwen Stacy, but I guess Mary Jane isn't bad. It's an interesting read. Can't wait to see how it turns out.
Jester79 chapter 15 . 5/26/2015
While that's got to be devastating to her regarding Charlie, it's saying something for Emanuele that he still cares for her and is trying to protect her. Even at that possibility of punishment for himself.
Jester79 chapter 13 . 5/4/2015
I'm guessing he had her phones tapped and too she wasn't very slick in her questioning, it's almost like she was trying to be caught - just to get it over with because she was tired of playing the game any longer. Mostly I believe she wanted to end it because she didn't want to deceive him any longer - she cared too much for him.
sitabird chapter 1 . 4/24/2015
Almost ever word spoken in this chapter had an exclamation point after it. The exclamation point should only be used when you want what is written to be screamed or shouted. "Shut up!" or Oh no!" "watch out!" See? Only things that you would yell. So for example when you wrote "'I don't think you should come here after today!' He said calmly and gently." that is the most extreme example of the wrong use of the exclamation point. You should take all the exclamation point out unless you actually want the words to be shouted.

Also, a mafia underboss doesn't need to ever shout, he is intimidating enough without needing to shout. It actually shows weakness to shout when you are trying to intimidate someone. Whispered or calmly spoken threats are much scarier.
oOMsGothicXmasOo chapter 9 . 4/9/2015
Very good so far. Really enjoy reading this story. Please post more chapters soon :)
Jester79 chapter 9 . 4/7/2015
She now has a huge taste of what his lifestyle is like and will continue to be for her, should she decide to continue trying to find anything out about Charlie. Thankfully, they didn't sexually assault her - outside cuts, bruises and wounds will heal, but the trauma from a rape or similar abuse would be very difficult to overcome.
Jester79 chapter 7 . 3/21/2015
I guess Evelyn is a typical news hungry boss or at least close to it. It really doesn't matter what happens to the reporter as long as she gets her story. Dangerous games and I think she'll fall into her own trap. Jade better be careful.
Jester79 chapter 6 . 3/16/2015
Lots of conflicting emotions for Jade. Mainly her family (brother and Ben (family friend)). Sometimes regardless of how wrong it may seem or completely illegal we can't help what our heart wants, even if it seems early in "the relationship".
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