I like it so far :)

Enjpyed this chapter. Nice to see it picked up after the other one ended. Hope tht this one has a happy ending also. But we will just have to see. You know dealing with the Mafia never guarateens a happy ending.

Keep up the good work. Will be awaiting more chapters.

Loooooooooove the story so far! Yep, very satisfying! I hope you will continue this one because I'm really curious about what will happen next

Just finished the story so far. I really enjoy it. Only have two items about the story for you to consider.
1. The name of the paper is The Tampa Tribune. There is no 's' in the last name. I know because I used to deliver it to homes.
2. The only casino with a hotel in Tampa is the Seminole Hard Rock and Casino. It is ran by the Seminole Indians. There are no mafia myers running it.

I know that it is a good romance story, but a little more research would have shown that there is only one casino/hotel in this town.

I will still read the story because other than that I think that it is really good and I want to see where it is going to go to.

Keep up the good work.