Reviews for Among The Mist |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A couple questions - I thought the girl created the mist. If so, how did she survive it? Also, in the beginning, you describe the person fighting the wolf as a mundane, but then later you say he's a Hybrid. Which is it? Good use of unique powers to create a fantasy story! Watch out for mechanical errors! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very quick paced. Maybe too quick? Interesting idea. Some grammar mistakes. Does the spelling wolfe go for just werewolfe or for regular wolves as well? I was a bit confused by that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd like to have the characters described a little better |