|Reviews for Among The Mist|
| msfoxycomets chapter 1 . 11/5/2014
A couple questions - I thought the girl created the mist. If so, how did she survive it? Also, in the beginning, you describe the person fighting the wolf as a mundane, but then later you say he's a Hybrid. Which is it?
Good use of unique powers to create a fantasy story! Watch out for mechanical errors!
| BarrenChasm chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
Very quick paced. Maybe too quick? Interesting idea. Some grammar mistakes. Does the spelling wolfe go for just werewolfe or for regular wolves as well? I was a bit confused by that.
| TheTuba chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
I'd like to have the characters described a little better