I liked all of the description in the story

You start the story strong with an excellent simile - "like a storm over a cautious sailor" - but then you use phrases like "hooked up with Penelope." For a 'majestic' story like this one, I'd use language like the first description and stay away from modern phrases.

This is both ridiculous and well-written. Absurd and fascinating.

I really like this. It's not something I would expect for a fantasy genre. That last paragraph was really good!it really grabbed my attention :)

I thought this was very interesting...obviously different, still well-written. Honestly, it just made me laugh so i really liked it.

Good plot it could've been longer in parts though

I like how the characters have to fight to get their homeland back. It was interesting to see how the battle would play out.

One issue I have is the use of the words hooking up when used in reference to the main characters parents. I feel as though there would be a better way to put it. Would you refer to your conception as your parents hooking up? I don't know it just sounds off to me. The story idea is interesting. I'm glad a swordfish was not involved.