Reviews for Athena
msfoxycomets chapter 1 . 11/5/2014
All the fantasy elements are here - princess, knight, quest, magic sword, etc. Some character development is missing. I would have liked to learn more about Nolan and especially Athena. What was she like, how did she cope with being kidnapped, etc.

You have some grammatical errors throughout. Read this aloud and you'll find them.
JoshuaMabus chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
This was a very good story I really liked it.