|Reviews for His Existence|
| Brievel chapter 1 . 2/26/2015
That last paragraph...exactly. That's it exactly. It does us no harm if He doesn't exist, and a great deal of good that He does.
| Written In Red chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
You have some very good thoughts. Of course, if God didn't exist neither would we if we're looking at life through a biblical paradigm! Nevertheless, I see where you're coming from.
I would do some proofreading in this piece. There are some instances where the wording is clumsy. Either words are out of order or not in the correct tense. In the last sentence it reads: "whether He or not exists." when it should read, "whether or not He exists." You don't want that to be your readers last impression of your thoughts.
Minor proofreading will help some of that! Otherwise, good thoughts. God is so good to us!