|Reviews for Lost|
| PoetOfSaiMiHunManKal chapter 1 . 3/18/2015
Apart from a few spelling and grammar mistakes (such as in line 10 where you should just say "gravel" instead of "a gravel", in line 13 "your" should be "you're"), this is a great poem. It's dark and to the point and the constant rhyme as well as the usage of short lines in some areas and alliteration (e.g. "seriously sick") all give it a nice flow. I can also relate to this poem as I know what it's like to hold on to the lingering memories of someone from the past and feel pain from it.
By the way, why is this given an M rating? There's nothing so inappropriate here that warrants such a rating.
But anyways, great poem!