you cant keep gwtting away with this i definitely have to read the paladin series now how are all these stories so great please keep writing and updating cant get enough

Truth be told, I was unimpressed by the first chapter, and was reluctant to keep on reading - but it seems I've been proven wrong! This is an absolutely fantastic story, and the setting itself is quite intriguing. I am now halfway through it, and would continue to read on, however it is now 3:40am and I really do need my rest. My hands itch to read the rest, and I know I'm going to thoroughly enjoy the rest of the story, just as much - if not more - as the first half. Thank you for composing this marvellous story!

Just wanted to say that I really enjoyed your story

there better be a sequel with the happy new married couple!

Oh my gosh yo update soon like super soon!

Nice! I'm surprised you only have one review. I like the way you portray Hypatia and how everyone keeps expecting ver to behave as a spoiled child. Loxias is SO annoying!

Your story is GREAT. I pulled all-nighters to get to 28 _
I think my favourite part so far was the fight between Erasmos and Sostias.
I got a little confused about the final places for the Chariot race. Was it Iros, woman, Erasmos, and then Loxias's slave?
In comparison, Erasmos and Iros had a relatively quick fight. But its understandable since the further along these games, the more injuries accumulated.

Looking forward to Chapter 29!