|Reviews for Mannequins|
| LDF chapter 1 . 5/15/2015
There's a ton of unnecessary speech tags scatted throughout the text. 'Said' is a lot less distracting.
| Tears of Pitch chapter 4 . 12/11/2014
why are you bashing christianity like this? this is a very static and cliche story, and I believe that these are just your views on my religion. I am sorry if you had an experience that lead you to this viewpoint, though I doubt you have had any experience of the kind, but you shouldn't bash others' religion like this, it is offensive and makes for bad story telling.