Omg I'm dying to know what's going on and what comes next! I really like this! Xoxo Robin

Oooo, this is an interesting start. I really like it! Xoxo Robin

Like I said before, this is some Shutter Island kind of shit. At first, I thought the dude stood for Jeremy's denied homosexuality or some shit. Now, I'm like, "Demon from a alternative plane who's waiting for Jer."

What stood out to me was that part where Mr. Erection was urging Jeremy to do something, and if I remember correctly, the sister was worried about Jeremy killing himself in the shower. I'm plagued by the idea that Jeremy has a history with this...

Hmmm. I dont know.

Anyway, this is the bomb. I hope you update someday. I'll favorite this later.

Uhh... I now think Jer is an asylum patient playing out his fantasy delusion whatever. Or maybe I'm too stupid to understand what's going on.

Ooohhh. This is so interesting. I'm just like PTSD? Magic curse? Voodoo? Damn, ain't I glad for the next two chapters.

You want to know my theories eh? Well they're half-baked at best. My first was a short psychoanalysis; Jeremy suffered through a traumatizing event - like rape - something to do with football, lamps, sunrises, etc. The mystery man may be a representation of that - like an abuser that haunts his victims and takes away that control over and over.

BUT - this chapter... I like the idea of an imaginary friend! A kinky sandman! Eeeee. That is what I'm hoping for. Totally on the edge of my seat with this mystery/horror!

I love the mystery of the dreams! Dreams and thoughts that don't make sense but all leading to one prime focus - some guy - obviously something happened and I neeeed to know!

I love Hannah, like how cool would it be to have a sister who could dye your hair all the time? I'd fucking love that!

Still, Jeremy is cray-cray and I love it.

I guess I'm just very slow cause I'm not quitesure whats going on unless he's having a mental breakdown. But I'm still enjoying this story & can't wait to read more! :)

I've been reading stories on this site for a few months, but I literally just created an account to review this story... and so you'll hopefully post Chapter 3!

You're style of writing is incredible and I look forward to reading your other work.

Amazing writing! I'm loving the story. Can't wait to see more!

This is a little confusing, not sure what's happening to Jeremy. :)

Poor Jeremy! Sounds like a good story! :)