Reviews for Top side up
Zantedeschia chapter 3 . 8/24/2015
You're not throwing this into void honey... You're throwing this to my heart full of erotics slash. I just don't get it.. DID THEY JUST HAVE SEX ?! CAUSE I CAN'T READ TOP LINE OF THINKING... he's just too random and too strange, too not natural and just too sexy... In a way, they both have experienced their firsts together, so sweet.
Zantedeschia chapter 2 . 8/24/2015
I love Biff, he is just soo innocent and adorable. I got too excited from his emotion and reaction... Keep on going! I LOVE this :3
Guest chapter 2 . 8/24/2015
This is so cute and innocent, biff is too innocent i got too excited from his reaction! Keep on going!
Flower-of-the-Earth chapter 3 . 11/14/2014
Hey it's the void! I love this :3 Biff is so adorable and I hope Tops moods flatten out before he upsets little Biffy. From a technical point of view I noticed you flip tenses sometimes ,everyone does it but it can be jarring. Also what's a shore? Thank you for writing this ! 3