Just read this in one go. Loved every minute of it! Especially since I happen to have a crush on someone pretty similar to 'Jeremy'. You probably know who I'm talking about... :)

Great writing, grammar, characters (Love Sophia) and plot. Will definately read this again!

Great story!

Aw so precious! Their first kiss! I know the story is already over and written but I would just love to get inside his mind and see what he is thinking and feeling during all of this, that would be so interesting! She needs to get more free time because they need lots of date nights lol

OMG he is officially PERFECT! My heart swooned at his note and how sweet he was with Sophia. I already want them to be together forever so good job lol

He better come back in soon to see her and not shy away because he thinks she has a kid! I think its pretty adorable that he brought her the magazine though. :)

Aw I just got all the good feels at the end of this chapter! They do seem very natural together I am already loving the story and I am very intrigued to see where this goes.

I LOVED IT! This story was great!

The best story i ever read yet on fictionpress!
I hope u write loads more! ;D

YAY! they did awss :)

I think they need 2 hurry up and get back 2gther again ;D

Awss! No really, cool as D

Jeremy/Sophia time is cute :))

okay u asked 4 it... ;D
AWSUM! ;)

This awsum story has every detail present and correct! :D

I have to start this out by saying 1) that I’m sorry I didn't review each and every chapter (because I know you love getting feedback) and 2) that I’m super proud of you for finishing another story (although, as you told me, it was already finished, etc. etc.) I’m not sure how much you can see it from your writer’s chair, but as someone who reads all of your stories (and will continue to do so, and continue to nag you to get them published) there is a lot of growth, from story to story. Maybe some of this has to do with life experience, for as someone who knows you well, I can see so much of YOU in your stories. But you have a natural talent, and I hope you never stop sharing with us.

As for the story itself, before I started reading it, I wasn’t sure if it would be my kind of story, with the Broadway, and nanny aspects (you know how I feel about children haha). However, I’d read anything you write, and of course, I ended up loving it (as I’m sure you could tell from my frequent, nagging messages for “more chapters!”). It was a somewhat fluffy story, but while it was light and adorable and sometimes comical, you handled the larger issues very seriously.

In a way though, I felt like you built us readers up for a surprise. Although you’d indicated throughout the story that Gen had some serious issues in self-confidence, especially in terms of her ability to be independent and self-supporting, every other problem that she and Jeremy encountered was easily handled and forgiven. Until he went behind her back and betrayed her trust. This was a huge deal and it was like BAM, you can’t just patch that up quickly. I may have been your only reader who cheered you on when you broke them up – because I just didn't see any other way for you/them to get around such a major conflict. I love how you handled this enormous hurdle and I love how you ended the story – I wasn't left with unanswered questions, and it wasn't ridiculously cheesy as some story endings tend to be.

So…. as I’ve said many, many times before, please keep writing more stories! I really do believe your stories should be published some day, and every sentence you write is another step towards making that happen. I’ll always support you/your writing, and, of course, I’ll continue to battle those sneaky typos for you, too ;)

Wuvs you bunches. – “Gwen”