Reviews for Lungs
Lillith Green chapter 1 . 11/17/2014
This was a very interesting essay. It was well written too, I really liked the lines about the girlfriend that filled you with butterflies and cotton. The way it was laid out was a little scattered though, the structure of the piece could have been a bit more cohesive, but it was a really good read. I felt like I was really in your head. I have my own medical conditions, so I know what it's like living with chronic illness and it can be really difficult. You captured that in your lines about how children who can't breathe can't play with other children. Nice work.
lightblueparadox chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
Keep breathing, my friend, just keep breathing.