Reviews for What They Want
RussetDivinity chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
This has a lot of potential, and I found the "translation" at the end very amusing. It does feel a bit too expositiony in some places (you could probably work in the necessary information more smoothly), and one small thing: in the first paragraph, Tiresiasia is referred to with female pronouns, but for the rest, the character has gender-neutral terms.