|Reviews for The Grande Hustle|
| NovemberRose1 chapter 1 . 11/20/2014
Two things; one good, one bad.
Let's start with the bad so we can end on a good note. The structure is really, really confusing. Did you do the structure that way? Was it an accident? Or do you have a point to make by writing it that way? Just to let you know, if you did plan on writing it that way, it is so confusing, that it doesn't help the sorry at all. It makes it quite distracting.
Good thing- amazing story, or at least the beginning. I would love to read what happens next! Keep writing! :-)
| Bob Story Builder chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
Don't stop there.