|Reviews for Yomi: A Monogatari|
| Kouki chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
A shinto mythology based story, I love it!
This was chapter 0 and seemed to be meant to give us just a small glimpse of the world so I won't bother talking about the overall plot right now; I will say that your description was good, I loved your use of words and I enjoyed the setting you laid out for me here.
If I had to make a criticism, it would be that you can split some of these paragraphs up; It adds to the drama sometimes when you single out certain lines by making them a paragraph of their own plus blocks of text can be hard to follow sometimes..
Anyway, this was a pretty amazing chapter and your lack of grammatical errors is very good!
| 360pages chapter 1 . 11/27/2014
This is a prologue right? Interesting so far, but not enough to actual for an opinion on the story so far. Now for the actual prose, it's good so far. Can be a little heavy at the start, but it still does its job well.
| DarksightKellar chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
'Tis goooood. 'Tis high time ye completed yuh novels!