Reviews for Kidnapped
msfoxycomets chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
I think Bonnie and Clyde would have spoken differently to each other. They were very much a young couple in "love." I don't think they would have bickered with each other. If they did take a captive, which was highly unlikely, they probably would have taken her to "have fun" with her.

You never established why they took her. Otherwise, I do like your concept. It's original and creative!
David Riegle chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
I like the story that you followed
Katelyn McCallum chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
Good would have been nice if you had used more detail on what the experience of being held hostage was like. I liked it.
TheTuba chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
Lots of typos but still really good.
Peanut butter
BarrenChasm chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
In*, too, who not which, they, saw, Bonnie, these are just some obvious mistakes. The writing isn't exactly the highest quality but with some editing this diamond in the rough could really shine.
L.Mazur chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
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JoshFisher chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
That's a great story, and it falls perfectly into the historical fiction genre