I think Bonnie and Clyde would have spoken differently to each other. They were very much a young couple in "love." I don't think they would have bickered with each other. If they did take a captive, which was highly unlikely, they probably would have taken her to "have fun" with her.

You never established why they took her. Otherwise, I do like your concept. It's original and creative!

I like the story that you followed

Good plot...it would have been nice if you had used more detail on what the experience of being held hostage was like. I liked it.

Lots of typos but still really good.
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In*, too, who not which, they, saw, Bonnie, these are just some obvious mistakes. The writing isn't exactly the highest quality but with some editing this diamond in the rough could really shine.

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That's a great story, and it falls perfectly into the historical fiction genre