Reviews for My brother Johan and me
DarkAngel chapter 51 . 6/20
I have read the story through within the last two days and it is very cute. I'm an only child and sadly don't know anything of the love and bond that siblings share but I really enjoy watching movies or stories about them. If your story is really based on your real life, I'm sorry for your loss and the hardships you had to go through but you really have an amazing brother. How did he even manage to be such a responsible person at his age? He probably had to mature quicker than he wanted to. The story is very sweet but I do have to mention that I have noticed some spelling and grammatical errors. How about asking someone to proofread the haters before posting them?
Gary chapter 8 . 5/8
Amanda really is a little madam, she got exactly what she deserved, i.e. a very sore bottom!
Gary chapter 7 . 5/8
A very richly deserved spanking for a naughty tantrum throwing girl, exactly as it should be; also excellent that she was made to stand in the corner before her spanking.
Tarl chapter 48 . 4/8
A great story, it brings back so many memories from when I was young.
Tarl chapter 3 . 4/8
Another great chapter, full of those tiny details we all remember from our childhoods. My only suggestion would be to proofread more.
Tarl chapter 2 . 4/8
A great character introduction. Full of detail and introspection.
Guest chapter 40 . 12/10/2017
I just love it. I can’t wait to the next part. You’re an amazing writter, congratulations!
CrimsonBlade21 chapter 6 . 11/18/2017
I remember my first crush too. It wasn’t both way though, she kind of hated me. If you have ever read the comic "Big Nate", my relationship with our was kind of like Nate and Jenny.
CrimsonBlade21 chapter 5 . 11/15/2017
I used to like to go to disneyland when I was younger. I never liked the roller coasters though, they were so scary! I still have a fear of roller coasters. Hey, do you still live with your brother?
CrimsonBlade21 chapter 4 . 11/7/2017
Your punishments were fair. Johan was a good "father" for you. My parents always hit me. I was a bad kid XD.
CrimsonBlade21 chapter 3 . 11/4/2017
Wow! That is not how my parents spanked me. My mom and dad would say: "Do you want to feel it?" or "Do you want to go to the bathroom?" They would say this in a menacingly voice, and if I disobeyed again, they woukd spank me. But they would not bend me over on their neigh. I like this so far. Nice childhood memories XD
kittysgomeow chapter 2 . 11/4/2017
in the third paragraph it said "I was referred to 35 square meters" referred doesn't apply to that sentence but confined does
in paragraph number five you should replace putted with put
I gave up with spelling/grammar there weren't that many and the story line is good I really like it :)
Fib112358 chapter 32 . 9/6/2017
Interesting to see how Amanda views her cousin getting spanked and how she feels it is much deserved.

I'm sort of amazed John didn't use the hairbrush (given this is the second time Emily broke something) and I'm curious as to why? I guess the breaking plates (on top of the swing) isn't as bad as breaking a bed, but it could also be because Emely is his cousin not his sister.

I was hoping the Emely might be a bit resentful to Amanda after the spanking, given that Amanda's honesty likely got her spanked (or at least made it worse). Could have made for a nice scene, with John scolding her and telling her that it was her fault.

Tops to John for not telling Uncle Fred about it
Fib112358 chapter 31 . 9/6/2017
I have always loved the growing fear one gets listening to another's spanking, knowing that their own is fast approaching.

It was a nice chapter, and it was good to see the dialog between Johan and Uncle Fred.

The chapter also had a nice call back to the Amanda breaking the bunk bed, it appears lessons taught by the hairbrush are not forgotten quickly.
Fib112358 chapter 30 . 8/26/2017
A sad but heartwarming chapter.
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