Reviews for A Charge of Bayonets
Heptapus chapter 1 . 3/14/2015
I really liked your usage of words in this one, it's quite rare to read something meant to rhyme in this way that does not get silly or limping in the long run!
PrennCooder chapter 1 . 2/25/2015
Interesting usage of words. Very cool.
Fib112358 chapter 1 . 2/2/2015
Very moving poem. War is a horrible, but sometimes necessary, aspect of life.
Nancy Mae chapter 1 . 1/20/2015
Thank you for your review. That was quick. :) I usually always try to review someone back in return for reviewing mine. So here goes...I really liked this one a lot. I had a very vivid picture in my head when reading this. I hope you write more like it.

And yes, I will be posting more poems. They take less time than stories do and they're sort of therapeutic for me. I'm actually writing one now that I'm not sure how it will be received. A lot of anger going into it, but I had to get it out. Thank you again for the review!
mahalie1426 chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
A Fire Rose chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
This is beautiful and moving! Bayonets and cannons - American Revolution?