|Reviews for My Little Secret|
| PassionateStylus chapter 24 . 5/17
Whew. That was long. Seriously, I started reading this for the first time today and it's already past midnight. But it is a pretty good story. My biggest problem with it is that you seem to enjoy switching between past and present tense, and seem to use certain words incorrectly. I also keep wondering why you left "LED" under-cased. Even so, it is a very good plot and I'm looking forward to what happens next. Thanks for the read.
| FloraGS chapter 24 . 2/28
Is the next update soon?
| Blair20 chapter 24 . 2/6
While your story this far has an amazing plot and many twists. Please update soon.
| tlotliso ntanzi chapter 24 . 12/20/2016
nice storie/novel wis continue it
| Kathy0113 chapter 24 . 11/19/2016
please update soon !
| CalistaSeraphina chapter 23 . 10/17/2016
| AlysonSerenaStone chapter 24 . 10/12/2016
Nice update! I really liked Jacob's part-really can't believe he just left!
| Zappe chapter 23 . 9/5/2016
Yikes! Wonder what brought her mom back, it certainly doesn't bode well for Kitty! O.O Fianlly caught up, time to wait :-)
I think you accidentally changed Jacobs eyes from blue to green. They are blue, right?
There's an m by itself with no e. "practically abandoned m"
Thought I brought, not bought :-)
| Zappe chapter 22 . 9/5/2016
There's a place, right after they get back to her apartment, where you forgot to capitalize Kitty's name :) You also have a lowercase i when Kitty's talking.
I'm glad she finally opened up to him :-)
| Zappe chapter 21 . 8/30/2016
Wow, that was an intense chapter! O.O
| Zappe chapter 20 . 8/29/2016
Wait, I thought he wasn't wearing a shirt. Did I just miss him putting it back on? :-/
Why does something always have to interrupt when things are starting to get good? . lol But yikes! That's a cryptic text! O.O
| Zappe chapter 16 . 8/26/2016
I love how he tenderly takes care of her, instead of taking advantage of her current condition. Despite the fact that he really wants too XD lol
| Zappe chapter 15 . 8/26/2016
Lucas becomes Luca in a setence O.o lol
| Zappe chapter 14 . 8/24/2016
Yikes! O.o lol
I like how she gets mad at him for pressing into her personal life without sharing his. Then how he hints that he would tell her, just at another time.
| Zappe chapter 13 . 8/24/2016
Awe, I love how concerned he is for her wellbeing 3 :-)