Reviews for My Little Secret
PassionateStylus chapter 24 . 5/17
Whew. That was long. Seriously, I started reading this for the first time today and it's already past midnight. But it is a pretty good story. My biggest problem with it is that you seem to enjoy switching between past and present tense, and seem to use certain words incorrectly. I also keep wondering why you left "LED" under-cased. Even so, it is a very good plot and I'm looking forward to what happens next. Thanks for the read.
FloraGS chapter 24 . 2/28
Is the next update soon?
Blair20 chapter 24 . 2/6
While your story this far has an amazing plot and many twists. Please update soon.
tlotliso ntanzi chapter 24 . 12/20/2016
nice storie/novel wis continue it
Kathy0113 chapter 24 . 11/19/2016
please update soon !
CalistaSeraphina chapter 23 . 10/17/2016
update soon!
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 24 . 10/12/2016
Nice update! I really liked Jacob's part-really can't believe he just left!
Zappe chapter 23 . 9/5/2016
Yikes! Wonder what brought her mom back, it certainly doesn't bode well for Kitty! O.O Fianlly caught up, time to wait :-)
I think you accidentally changed Jacobs eyes from blue to green. They are blue, right?
There's an m by itself with no e. "practically abandoned m"
Thought I brought, not bought :-)
Zappe chapter 22 . 9/5/2016
There's a place, right after they get back to her apartment, where you forgot to capitalize Kitty's name :) You also have a lowercase i when Kitty's talking.
I'm glad she finally opened up to him :-)
Zappe chapter 21 . 8/30/2016
Wow, that was an intense chapter! O.O
Zappe chapter 20 . 8/29/2016
Wait, I thought he wasn't wearing a shirt. Did I just miss him putting it back on? :-/
Why does something always have to interrupt when things are starting to get good? . lol But yikes! That's a cryptic text! O.O
Zappe chapter 16 . 8/26/2016
I love how he tenderly takes care of her, instead of taking advantage of her current condition. Despite the fact that he really wants too XD lol
Zappe chapter 15 . 8/26/2016
Lucas becomes Luca in a setence O.o lol
Zappe chapter 14 . 8/24/2016
Yikes! O.o lol
I like how she gets mad at him for pressing into her personal life without sharing his. Then how he hints that he would tell her, just at another time.
Zappe chapter 13 . 8/24/2016
Awe, I love how concerned he is for her wellbeing 3 :-)
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