Reviews for The Phoenix Rises
FictionFox'95 chapter 3 . 12/29/2014
Just as descriptive as ever. He sounds like the guard all bouncers want to be. Another great chapter, though, I do raise a suspicious eyebrow at Draguta... cool name though :D
FictionFox'95 chapter 2 . 12/4/2014
Hmm... five nights a week AND graveyard shift? Will there be any animatronic robots running in the halls? lol sorry, I've just heard more than enough about the Five Nights games. Raphael seems to have gotten a pretty short fuse over time. I'm really looking forward to how he handles this new employment. I really like how you ended the chapter; it brought a conclusion to his day, and yet, it still left a cliffhanger leaving me curious about what happens. Also, the rock music matches his winning personality. Another great chapter, keep it up! :D
FictionFox'95 chapter 1 . 12/3/2014
I like it, sounds utterly promising. I like the contrast how, in the past, he was hesitant to shoot a moose. Now he's taking out soldiers; It's a great transition from beginnings. Looking forward to more chapters! :D