Good chapter. I am so excited to see where this story goes! Glad you got the chapter fixed.

Although I am not a fan of the time jump and then flashback, this chapter was great! Hope to read the next one soon.

Oh this has a strange formatting issue. I've seen this a few times :/ I think you just need to re-upload it! :)

Awesome! I was able to read this chapter but it was really hard to because with every paragraph there was a line of random letters and symbols. But I made out the story from all of the symbols though and enjoyed this chapter.

I like I just don't understand what that was saying

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I don't know about everyone else, but I am unable to see this chapter. The whole chapter is messed up for me.

Oh sweet beans I didn't know you had a FictionPress! awesome! Anyway I'm still praying for your recovery to go smoothly. Take care.
o_o CAT FACE!

I CANT WAIT FOR MOREEEEE!

Red is developing into an interesting character. And this fellow with the honey eyes I think is a *darts a peek around seeing coast clear* a werewolf. This is such an interesting story! If Red falls in love with this fellow, I'll be sad (just kidding but seriously lets not do Twiglight). If Red does fall in love with this fellow, I'll be okay because he would be an interesting character to write a relationship about and be cool to see how you would develop them if they fall in love.

Awesome chapter! I loved it - super excited that Red ran into him again! XD
And I'm sorry to hear about your wrist and ankle.

I'm sorry about your broken ankle and wrist. I hope you get better soon. I thought this chapter was great. I am very curious about how Juliette came to be blamed for the twins' deaths. Did the others who were with her that night, besides Amber, blame her? Why was Amber asking for her forgiveness before she went over the wall? And where were her parents when all of this was happening? I am excited that the stranger has made his appearance. I cannot wait until the next chapter!

I just started reading your story today and absolutely love it! I am excited to read the next chapter.

What the hell? I love this story. Can't believe Red is jailed. The grandma was right. These villagers are cowards!

Did the group not tell the chief and the villagers about the wolf whistle and the wolf's appearance? Is the village completed surrounded by the wall/fence or is it only partially surrounded. Great chapter! That was pretty gruesome what happened to the twins. I wonder if the culprit was the man she encountered in the woods or another person we have not been introduced to yet.