PLOT TWIST

Loved it , aww jayden and daniel are having problems I hope they sort it out and kiss and make up already , its depressing to see them like this . Who is telling the truth and who is lying that is the question I would love to know . Poor daniel he feels like he's heart got shattered to a million pieces , he was just a game to jay den and now jay loves him .. What is he going to believe because its so convent that he choose now to tell him how he really feels. Can't wait for the next chapter and thanks for all the double bill chapters . (Yes I would love to read a sequel to this story and yes your writing is good it captures the reader and we can't seem to get enough of it so if you do write another story will check it out .)Would be nice to get a reply back from you .

ok, that was a surprise :(. Yep, a big one. I really, really hope the title is not linked to this. So, next chapter/s please? 3 a day would be amazing but I feel like I'm asking for the Moon so, maybe 2? :D. Thank you. Great chapters again :)

I swear, this book is like nicotine. I can't go to bed each day without getting my daily fix. (Not that I actually smoke, but you know what I mean.)

Well...I'm glad I could keep myself from smashing my laptop. Why stop the chapter at the best part? Why?*screaming*... Ok, now that I'm back to calm (sorry for before), I can't seem to figure out for how long they've been together. I'm a bit lost in the info. It seems that they got together few months back and I have to say that for two teenage boys in love they are incredibly patient (if you know what I mean ;) ). Or you just don't want to write that part (boooo). It is rated T so I have no idea if it is allowed. Well, anyway, I did enjoy the chapter :). BTW, may I suggest something? i know it may be a bother but it would be nice if the author will replay sometimes to our messages/reviews or just laugh at our comments :). It would keep you closer to us: your fans ;). just a humble suggestion :P

Hey, great story. Keep writing.

Hi. Great chapter! opening new questions, making us more interested in what comes next :). You definitely have some fans by now (me included :D). About your questions: 1) the thought of a sequel makes me think of how you want to end the story. If the story will flow as good as it does now then I'm interested in a sequel. careful though, too much drama may lead to a hard to follow story and will lose the interest. 2) you have a great writing style in my opinion. You are able to make a story vibrant and the pace is very good. I like the characters also. They "grow" nicely with the story. So, you want to try a story with vampires? give it a try. I would read it.

Love it , it was nice of jayden to introduce daniel to his father but he's father was so scary at first but came around . Daniel should just tell melanie the truth and I'm sure she will understand because she probably figured it out by now can't wait for the next chapter .

Loved it , daniel and jayden seem so good together , that nicolas needs the crap beaten out ta him , to hit little girls and hit jayden's mum and grandma . its an abusive household and he's fighting back for all of them but at what price , he needs to get help so solve the matter then it getting worst . I liked how jay got all protection over his sisters and danny and came off a bit scary . Jay talking all crazy in the end and all but at least he knows daniel will be there for him and that he'll be waiting for him when he come back . I like the last quote , daniel gonna be a soldier exclusively for him , its too sweet . Can't wait for the next chapter .

I loved it wow ,the truth finally comes out .. No shocker there but diego , mia and jayden oh my god can things be so complicated with that three no wonder they hate each other because jayden stole mia's boyfriend and she just hasn't got over it and now its deja vu all over again. Poor daniel left wondering what the hell happened between them .

Last chapter was OK, except that the perfect Daniel deeply disappointed me when Mia handed him a chance on a silver platter to come clean and he didn't. This chapter is less depressing and may be a turning point, toward a way that Daniel and Jayden can be together one or two years from now.

Yay! thank you :). Very nice surprise with two chapters again. can we hope for this to become a trend? :D Indeed this chapter is to be proud off. Waiting for tomorrow now...the story is captivating. Well done!

I do not usually review but do lurk from time to time. Busy with law school. I was intrigued by your story of a modern homosexual romance. I come from a culture that deeply frowns upon the practice, but I myself am trying to learn more. This portrait is illuminating, though I realize it is still a work of fiction. Striking that romance develops in similar ways, gender aside. Writing needs improvement. I just do not have enough space (nor time) to give thorough constructive criticism here unfortunately. I hope to read the end soon and am appreciate comparing the character studies to ancient Greek relationships between men.

P.S. Daniel should go to Yale, the Ivy most friendly to gays.

Wow I loved it ,this story gets more and more interesting , I'm glad jayden is opening up to daniel about his past and now daniel can see where he's coming from and all the obstacles and abuse he went through . I feel so bad for jayden but everything that happened to him made him stronger made him the young man he is today . They knew each other in freshman year wow and daniel used to talk to him one way but couldn't remember lol , can't wait for the next chapter .

OMG I'm Sooooo Ready For The Next Chapter. Are The Gonna Have Sex?