Reviews for Unattainable
Otakuami chapter 1 . 12/28/2018
The ending was the BEST! Seriously I absolutely loved the girl's personality and how hard the boy was trying so that he doesn't screw up. The way she's so helping and how it hurts him to belong to a lower class.
reindrops chapter 1 . 7/22/2018
I don't know why I haven't discovered this sooner. I really enjoyed reading this story. Blake and Cecilia are so sweet 3
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2018
Sweet :)
heal me forever chapter 1 . 2/11/2018
This is so beautiful and lovely:)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2016
I really really liked this one. Seriously great!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2015
So so amazing. I really loved this. Great job!
krisanita chapter 1 . 10/19/2015
Ds was rily good,I haven't reviewd since foreva BT Ds gt me
my princess ending chapter 1 . 6/5/2015
My heart just aches every time I read about couples who shouldn't end up together. This gives me so much hope because people like Blake and Cecelia are who I live for. They don't care about anyone and do what they want. I love this. Great job.
ARulzz chapter 1 . 2/19/2015
AMessofPickles chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
This was an amazing story to read and I sincerely enjoyed every second of it. I think it's amazing that you can go from writing a story like Philip Phillips to this! The world you created with these characters was unforgettable and I loved the characters.
I think my favorite part of the story was the very beginning where Cecelia completely exceeds Blake's expectations. Oh and I loved that awesome one-liner that you ended the story with. I think it was a perfect way to wrap up everything, and I'm really glad you chose to end it that way.
Also, I really enjoyed the pacing of their relationship. Nothing about the way they came together appeared unrealistic, which can be difficult to do in a one-shot and a smaller amount of words. But you did it beautifully, and I really enjoyed seeing Cecelia become frustrated and how Blake reacted and everything was just really well done.
So glad that you participated in the Star Crossed round! Your entry was really really amazing and was for sure a close call compared to the winning story! Can't wait to see what else you come up with :)
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
Wonderful little story! I like how you did the whole relationship and not just part of it-it makes the story feel more complete.
Julietish chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
Your prose is absolutely exquisite. Throughout the one-shot there was this lovely rhythm in your words and descriptions, particularly those of Cecilia and her beauty. The theme of forbidden love seemed very fitting for a prompt that asks for a R & J reference, so that was a well-written element. Something that left me a little bit confused was the description of the trees by the phone booth because the photograph doesn’t show any trees. Nonetheless, as the author, you have a right to creative embellishment. Lastly, I really loved the tie-in of “Who gives a fuck?” It just radiates the positive side of love in the wildest manner. Your one-shot earns ‘Honorable Mention’ for this prompt, so congratulations! Thank you so much for participating this round, and I hope you decide to submit again in the future.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
Oh this was so beautiful. You're truly an amazing writer.
Lovelynessa chapter 1 . 12/11/2014
Perfectly written! I just love how you made them end up together in the end just yes! In fact I was just in the mood for reading a story with those Romeo Juliet-ish forbidden type of story plot and it's historical too which makes it even more amazing as that's really what I've been craving for lately so it's such right time that you posted this...thank you so much! Now to wait for your LAaS and PvP updates!
Amy chapter 1 . 12/11/2014
The ending was perfect
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