Not my favorite story of yours. I feel like your usual Voice is absent. It's well-written but lacks substance. I guess that's because the ending is a bit unsatisfying. Cheer up, the mystery genre isn't for everyone! :)

He did what nice plot twist

This is a great story! It immediately grabbed the reader's attention, had a good amount of plot twists, and an unexpected ending. good job!

I really like this. It's very intriguing

And curiouser. Very interesting.

The surprising twist at the end was great!

Great start & great ending