Reviews for The Melys Sea
pumadelic chapter 1 . 12/15/2014
I enjoyed this: vivid descriptions of the ship, sea life, the merpeople and clever ideas about the merpeople's lifestyle. I never thought of merpeople having to hide from predators but it makes sense.

There are some minor gaps in punctuation. Eg:

"Who are ya?" spit sprayed..spit should have a capital.

The 'all a dream' ending can be a bit cliched so maybe that needs redoing.
J.A. Cadelina chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
Wow, this was spectacular! Nice writing style! So Adira (Adria) is a mermaid now? Nice!