Reviews for Train 3
msfoxycomets chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
Interesting choice to make your protagonist a 70 year old man. You'll have some obstacles to overcome with his physical limitations later in the story that will be interesting to read. Obviously your choice in name for your victim was intentional - Jesus Amen...bit heavy handed, huh? And a cross-shaped blood stain? Haha.

I like the supernatural element you've added to the mystery at the end. What type of darkness has he entered. The only thing I caution you on is having your character forget who he is...that will become difficult when he doesn't even know anything else about his surroundings.
Katelyn McCallum chapter 1 . 12/16/2014 this is more of a supernatural mystery rather than crime mystery. That's good, and I liked the plot twist at the end. I just wonder what happened? Ugh cliffhangers are rough, man.