Reviews for Unwaging War
Cackling Cactus chapter 2 . 12/21/2014
Dang, I wish I'd placed money...probably too late to do so about tacos instead? XD
Your revising and making-over of the characters is what saved this story from a fiery death. So don't worry in the slightest about the length;)
I think Kol's my favorite council member. XD
I like the character development and interaction we're seeing with Dareth and Alithea. Good job! :D
Cackling Cactus chapter 1 . 12/18/2014
Man, I don't know who to slap first, Kalle or Dareth. -_- Poor Alithea, she just gets the worst luck...and this is just the first chapter. :(
Also, by the way, what a great start! :D You've improved on this first bit so much I hardly recognized it, and I can about place money that the rest of the story will be just as interesting. Congratulations! :D *partyfacefromHowrse* I eagerly await the rest! I'm just sorry my review is late, I'll try to be more prompt posting in the future. I got hung up conquering another world using only a toaster and a matchstick. Muwahahahaha! XD Cactus out! PEACE! 0_0
jnaulty chapter 1 . 12/18/2014
Oh man, that's good...
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