Awwwww that girl Audrey was so adorable And poor Chris T - T

Ooooh so is this story written as if the readers are reading the girl's diary? I really like that! And I love the depressing theme of the story because I am just like that lol. Keep writing~

Your story is simply amazing. I love everything about it from the detail to the dialogue to their thoughts to their emotions. I love the depth of your story and the originality of it. The emotions were displayed in great detail. Cheers!